Comments on: Neatly Pressed

By: lauraeno (Laura Eno)

lauraeno (Laura Eno) — Mon, 07 Sep 2009 05:32:40 +0000

RT @AnthonyDeaver: RT: @jentropy: Neatly Pressed. My #fridayflash Only 183 words. http://www.jentropy.com/archives/392

By: 2maraA (2mara Armstrong)

2maraA (2mara Armstrong) — Mon, 07 Sep 2009 04:46:41 +0000

RT @AnthonyDeaver: RT: @jentropy: Neatly Pressed. My #fridayflash Only 183 words. http://www.jentropy.com/archives/392

By: AnthonyDeaver (AnthonyDeaver)

AnthonyDeaver (AnthonyDeaver) — Mon, 07 Sep 2009 04:43:23 +0000

RT: @jentropy: Neatly Pressed. My #fridayflash Only 183 words. http://www.jentropy.com/archives/392

By: Jen

Jen — Mon, 07 Sep 2009 02:36:10 +0000

Judy, thank you so much for sharing. I had never even thought of it from that perspective. It really makes me see things differently.

By: judy b.

judy b. — Sun, 06 Sep 2009 23:58:57 +0000

I enjoy your artistic use of language. What happens is secondary, for me, to how the characters are navigating – physically and emotionally – what happened.

By: Jen

Jen — Sun, 06 Sep 2009 21:39:28 +0000

Netta, I’m glad you appreciated it. I like letting the reader make choices. I usually write a lot more than ends up in the final version. I just write a story, and then delete as much as I can so the reader can make it their own.

By: Jen

Jen — Sun, 06 Sep 2009 21:38:25 +0000

Anthony, thanks for reading twice!!!

By: Jen

Jen — Sun, 06 Sep 2009 21:38:07 +0000

Thanks, Eric! I just described the image in my head. I think I just write from a snapshot.

By: Jen

Jen — Sun, 06 Sep 2009 21:37:35 +0000

Pippa, thanks! I haven’t tried reading it aloud. Maybe I should do that next time.

By: Jen

Jen — Sun, 06 Sep 2009 21:37:09 +0000

Chris, that’s very kind of you. You are too generous!