Comments on: Grace Note

By: jentropy (Jennifer Jones)

jentropy (Jennifer Jones) — Tue, 28 Jul 2009 04:44:35 +0000

I deliberately wrote this to see if readers would find it good or evil, their own truth. http://www.jentropy.com/archives/359 #litchat

By: Carrie

Carrie — Mon, 27 Jul 2009 21:34:29 +0000

Murder, he wrote. You tease me with fonder secrets. I can’t see past the floral aching lines and tangerine-tattered leaves.

Love your work as usual.

Carrie

By: Jen

Jen — Tue, 21 Jul 2009 03:44:45 +0000

Thank you, Jeff. I can’t wait for autumn!

By: Jeff Posey

Jeff Posey — Tue, 21 Jul 2009 03:19:03 +0000

Oh, yes, this is poetry. Lay it out anyway you like, but this is poetry. Pick any phrase at random:

A sweet bonfire wind

Sounds like the title of a good book.

Lovely piece, Jen.

By: Jen

Jen — Mon, 20 Jul 2009 15:31:19 +0000

No apologies! I’m grateful you’re late. Your tweets are reminding me to get everyone added to my blogroll. And I’m jealous of your powerful imagination!

By: 2mara

2mara — Mon, 20 Jul 2009 15:29:06 +0000

This is a really lovely piece, and like the rest I know I am going to have to read it many more times.

I am so jealous of how you can say so much in such a little piece.

Many apologies for being late.
~2

By: Jen

Jen — Sun, 19 Jul 2009 18:15:12 +0000

Thank you, Jon. I wonder how much my style will continue to change. I don’t seem to have settled into anything quite yet. It does seem I’m using fewer words and exploring shorter snippets of life.

By: J. M. Strother

J. M. Strother — Sun, 19 Jul 2009 17:42:52 +0000

There is a lyrical quality to your writing that I enjoy quite a bit. Nice.
~jon

By: Jen

Jen — Sun, 19 Jul 2009 02:08:22 +0000

Chris, thanks for stopping by and taking the time to comment!

By: Jen

Jen — Sun, 19 Jul 2009 02:07:23 +0000

Thanks, Pippa! I don’t know much about poetry, or prose poetry, but you’re not the first one to mention that to me. I should look it up. Thanks for reading!