Comments on: Recycled

By: Carrie

Carrie — Mon, 22 Jun 2009 15:58:39 +0000

This is wonderful!

By: Jen

Jen — Sun, 21 Jun 2009 02:51:17 +0000

Jon, thanks for stopping by! I hope I get to play next week too, it was fun!

By: Jen

Jen — Sun, 21 Jun 2009 02:49:18 +0000

Chris, that means the world to me. I actually thought of you as I wrote it. I had a story and an image in my head and the words didn’t describe how I felt about the snapshot. So I stopped writing a description and just painted with words. I wondered what it would be like to be a poet, and wondered what kinds of things you write and throw away.

By: Chris L

Chris L — Sun, 21 Jun 2009 02:28:17 +0000

This is far and away the best piece of your creative writing I’ve seen. A gift I’m grateful to have received.

By: J. M. Strother

J. M. Strother — Sun, 21 Jun 2009 02:27:35 +0000

Thoughtful piece. Glad you took part in the #fridayflash. Hope to see you next week.
~jon

By: Jen

Jen — Sat, 20 Jun 2009 13:58:51 +0000

Thanks for reading, Laura! Now that I know about the #fridayflash I can start preparing earlier in the week.

By: Jen

Jen — Sat, 20 Jun 2009 13:58:11 +0000

Thanks, Dan. It really is a completely different piece than when I started it. I only spent a few hours on it, but the story was originally much bigger, and pretty boring.

By: jentropy (Jen)

jentropy (Jen) — Sat, 20 Jun 2009 12:57:01 +0000

New story for #fridayflash http://www.jentropy.com/archives/331 Recycled. #fiction #flashfiction

By: Laura Eno

Laura Eno — Sat, 20 Jun 2009 12:19:34 +0000

Glad you joined the #fridayflash! Great feeling of contentment to this piece!
Laura

By: danpowell

danpowell — Sat, 20 Jun 2009 07:52:03 +0000

Reads like a cross between stream of conciousness and poetry, in thrid person. This fusion gives the piece life. A lot of flash fiction does not require re-reading, this demands it for all the right reasons. Lovely.